Monday, September 14, 2009

An attempt at poetry

Who am I?

I don’t know!

To find the truth,

Where shall I go?

Do I need to go somewhere?

Or do I need to be just aware?!

So I looked inside…….

………..deep inside…

And then, through the abyss,

Came a light,

For me to realize!

I, is not a mystery

To be solved.

A definition to be evolved.

But rather an adventure

To be explored!

A beauty to be adored!!!

10 comments:

  1. its nice ,,but no twists and turns,spend more time on d feeling

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  2. Straight from the heart! 'I is an adventure to be explored.' Loved this line. And give a suitable title for the poem.
    Looking forward to more of such things. Keep writing!

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  3. Hey Tanmaya! Good start considering you are trying yr hand @ poetry for the 1st time!

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  4. thank you ppl!!! really value your comments! plz keep visiting the blog on a regular basis...

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  5. Heyy, this is a cool poem with a cool thought!
    Specially like the last line, not only 'a evolving definition' but 'a beauty to be adored'!! :D
    Love a woman who knows how to be one. :~))
    Great attempt, I'm gonna be back for more!
    Cheers ^_^

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  6. good attempt.......but rhymes with a very famous quote that goes "Life is not a mystery to solve but journey to be explored "

    Never mind longest journey begins with small step.....regards

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  7. hey tanmaya..
    nice poem... is tat ur 1st attempt???

    haf fun
    Anoop

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  8. "I, is not a mystery
    To be solved.
    A definition to be evolved.
    But rather an adventure
    To be explored!"

    awesome lines

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  9. thank you all!!!
    @guria - thanks!! would value your comments! plz do keep visiting....
    @ sunil - i am not aware of that quote.. so it was not intentional....
    @ anoop and naveen - keep visiting..

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