Who am I?
I don’t know!
To find the truth,
Where shall I go?
Do I need to go somewhere?
Or do I need to be just aware?!
So I looked inside…….
………..deep inside…
And then, through the abyss,
Came a light,
For me to realize!
I, is not a mystery
To be solved.
A definition to be evolved.
But rather an adventure
To be explored!
A beauty to be adored!!!
its nice ,,but no twists and turns,spend more time on d feeling
ReplyDeleteStraight from the heart! 'I is an adventure to be explored.' Loved this line. And give a suitable title for the poem.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to more of such things. Keep writing!
Hey Tanmaya! Good start considering you are trying yr hand @ poetry for the 1st time!
ReplyDeletethank you ppl!!! really value your comments! plz keep visiting the blog on a regular basis...
ReplyDeleteHeyy, this is a cool poem with a cool thought!
ReplyDeleteSpecially like the last line, not only 'a evolving definition' but 'a beauty to be adored'!! :D
Love a woman who knows how to be one. :~))
Great attempt, I'm gonna be back for more!
Cheers ^_^
good attempt.......but rhymes with a very famous quote that goes "Life is not a mystery to solve but journey to be explored "
ReplyDeleteNever mind longest journey begins with small step.....regards
hey tanmaya..
ReplyDeletenice poem... is tat ur 1st attempt???
haf fun
Anoop
"I, is not a mystery
ReplyDeleteTo be solved.
A definition to be evolved.
But rather an adventure
To be explored!"
awesome lines
thank you all!!!
ReplyDelete@guria - thanks!! would value your comments! plz do keep visiting....
@ sunil - i am not aware of that quote.. so it was not intentional....
@ anoop and naveen - keep visiting..
It was really nice :)
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