We run from place to place,
In search of solace.
From dawn till dusk we wait,
Only to be betrayed.
Is there a god we ask?
Or is it a demon in a mask!
People say they hear a call,
But I have never heard them at all!
Down on their knees they kneel
Only to appeal,
To that man they say is GOD!
But I say, to hear them out, HE forgot!!
What is that makes a man pray,
without allowing his faith to sway?
I call this all a spoof,
For a mere lack of a definite proof!
So here is my judgement to you all
Don’t you go and take a fall!!
Believe in what YOU are!
Not in some man, some place afar!!
tanmaya,
ReplyDeletethis once is nice...with those rhymin words...i used to wonder how ppl get those rhymin words.. ;)
haf fun
Anoop
You getting better and better with each new post that you come up with! Nice rhyme scheme. As for the presence of God, its a topic that is being debated since time immemorial. Its a rather controversial topic! Each incredible thing that happens, proves time and again that there are certain things beyond the control of ordinary mortals and there is a higher power that controls the entire cosmos. Besides, it is always nice to believe that you ain't alone when troubles besiege you.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with your judgement :)
ReplyDeletePretty good. You know, even Einstein said 'God is human weakness'. We had this debate on God on a forum. You might want to check it out
ReplyDeletehttp://amalganation.forumotion.net/colosseum-f10/whaddaya-think-about-god-t217.htm
Oh and by the way, I have already posted The Watchmaker. Read it when you have at least an hour to spare. Its pretty long. Looking forward to your comment :)
This one is better than your previous one.
ReplyDeleteWhen it comes to the poem, I've never prayed, I've never tried to hear a distant voice, never believed in a super power. Maybe that's why i love this poem very much.
"Believe in what YOU are! Not in some man, some place afar."
Nice lines.
Keep writing!
HI Tanmaya,
ReplyDeleteFirst i would like to say that i loved ur "About Me"..yeah..i too take writing as my profession if i'm given a chance now..
and u have a nice book shelf..:)
And this post..Good expressions..:)
Read some part of ur short stories..looks interesting..will read them too..Thanks for droping by my blog and introducing me to ur beautiful blog..
Sure, i wil always be thr fr u to ecourage u ..Keep expressing ..
You've been tagged in my latest post..
ReplyDeleteWonderful and true words, a pleasure to read.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit and kind and comforting words, Yes, many friendships are made from blogging.
Yvonne.